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Chapter 439: The Crime Scene

“Brother Vader, is this really all right?” Firehead kept plucking at her tattered coat. “Chief Knight said the uniform is a symbol of authority. We’re supposed to wear it neatly when on duty.”

“And there’s a punishment for dirtying it,” Whistle added, eyes moving left and right, watching for colleagues. “Let alone not wearing it at all.”

“Stop fussing.” Vader spat into the snow. “Wearing it is symbolic—I get it. Standing in the snow in a black uniform also broadcasts to every criminal within fifty paces that police are present. How do you catch anyone that way?” He looked at them. “You’re both from Border Town?”

Both policewomen straightened. Firehead nodded. “My father was a hunter, lived on Old Street. He could put an arrow through a fox’s neck while it was running through the woods.”

Whistle: “My father too, but he said hunting was uncertain and wanted me in the mines. He’d already found a hoe for me. If His Highness Roland hadn’t become lord, that’s where I’d be.”

“I can tell,” Vader said. Only a hunter’s child ends up with a name like Whistle. “Since you’re locals, you care more about public order than I do. If I’m willing to risk the punishment, why are you hesitating? Is the uniform more important than the law His Highness laid down?”

They thought about it. “You’re right,” they said together.

“Besides,” Whistle added, “you’re not really an outsider anymore. You have your identity card. His Highness said anyone who carries one is his subject.”

Vader laughed and said nothing. He fixed his gaze on the row of cave dwellings on the eastern edge of the temporary housing area.

Nearly three months as a police officer. He had arrived thinking a patrol team was a patrol team—you extorted, you covered for whoever paid you, you filled time between payoffs. He had grown up watching the Valencia patrol teams work exactly that way. They were city guards’ backup, useful for menial tasks and illicit income, a parallel economy running alongside the official one.

Border Town had dismantled that assumption inside a week.

The volume of work alone was unlike anything he’d experienced. Police accepted refugees, mediated disputes, made arrests, hunted informants. The First Army fought outside the walls; the police managed everything inside them. Two separate systems, two separate chains of authority, no overlap and no freelancing. He had looked for the usual arrangement—some superior who skimmed, some area where the rules bent—and found none.

What surprised him most was where the targets came from. Not orders passed down from above, but reports from citizens. Every time a foreign merchant ship docked, a handful of citizens walked to City Hall with information. He had revised his assessment of commoners substantially since arriving.

No spy could hide here who hadn’t grown up here. Everyone watching, everyone reporting, the whole population as a surveillance apparatus that cost nothing to maintain.

Of course, not every operation went cleanly. The foreign merchant they’d arrested last week had turned out to be a noble from the Kingdom of Dawn. Vader had braced for consequences. None came. His superiors showed no particular concern about the incident—which told him something useful about how far the rules extended.

“Gold’s moving,” Firehead said softly.

“Don’t react. Keep sweeping.” Vader held his broom steady and watched the target—the serf with the code name Gold, who had emerged from one of the cave dwellings and was moving through the eastern district without any visible cargo. A reconnaissance pass. The deal wasn’t happening yet.

Two days ago, the Ministry of Justice had received a report: a serf trafficking grain. Carter had assigned the case personally and given the directive—arrested alive, goods seized intact. He had named it the Gold Hunting Mission, which was the kind of name Carter gave things when he considered them important.

The first day and a half had produced nothing. The problem was the uniforms. Vader had figured that out quickly. In this district, news of a City Hall official’s presence spread through the resident population in minutes. Serfs watched authority the way prey watched predators—continuously, from the edges, never quite meeting your eye. Black police uniforms in the Eastern Zone were visible from fifty meters and telegraphed arrival thirty seconds before it happened.

So: tattered coats. Brooms. Swept snow going nowhere. Three officers rotating through the thoroughfares, unremarkable.

Gold vanished into his cave dwelling and came out carrying a large sack on his back.

“Wheat,” Whistle said under her breath. Her fists were tight.

“Bastard,” Firehead said. “We should take him now.”

“Wait.” Vader kept his voice flat. “Carter wants him with the goods and the buyer present. We move on my signal.” He ran through the positions in his head. The old city wall ran north of here; the only route to the inner market passed through a single gap in the masonry. “Firehead—go now. Get to the old wall gap ahead of him. Don’t let him see you moving fast.”

“Yes.”

“I’ll lead—walk ahead of him, not behind. If he doesn’t know where I’m going, he watches me less.” He’d learned this in Valencia, watching better operators work. Following from behind triggered awareness; preceding the target, especially if you moved at the same pace, created a blind spot in their attention. “Whistle—stay a hundred steps back. Don’t look at him.”

“Understood.”

“Go.”

Vader picked up his broom and walked, at the ordinary pace of a man clearing snow with nowhere particular to be, directly in front of Gold and slightly to the right. He tracked the footsteps behind him without turning. He had done this enough times that the slight shifts in gait—weight transfer, hesitation, the split-second pause that preceded a turn—read to him as clearly as words on paper.

Gold moved through the eastern district. Past the old wall gap. Past the point where Firehead would be positioned and waiting. He stopped at the corner of a street on the interior side and set the sack down. Waiting for the buyer.

Vader turned into a side path and pressed himself against the wall.

A few minutes later: a local man, pushing a handcart, appearing from the direction of the market. He moved slowly, checked his surroundings twice, and then walked up to the serf. He lifted the flap of the sack, examined the contents, and reached into his coat for coins.

The moment his hand came out, Vader stepped back into the thoroughfare and raised his arm.

They came from three directions simultaneously.

The buyer froze where he stood, hand still extended, coins catching the pale winter light. Vader drove Gold down into the snow with a knee in his back. Coins scattered and rolled. He heard them ringing against the cobblestones even as he was pulling the man’s wrists together.

“You’re arrested.”

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