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Chapter 30: Out of the Fog

The man who replaced Fierce Scar in the fight lasted two exchanges before Brian disarmed him.

The problem was what came after.

Brian swept the second man’s sword away and started toward Fierce Scar — and felt the strike coming from behind only in the half-second before it landed. He threw himself backward, which was not a fencing technique and did not solve the problem but changed it: instead of a sword through the back, he took a blade across the chest, shallow and burning and not immediately fatal. He rolled twice and came up in a crouch and looked at who had cut him.

Not a member of the patrol.

The man was not tall, but he was built wrong — arms too long for his body, hands that hung past his knees, eyes that caught the torchlight in a way that was specific and unpleasant. Brian had spent ten years memorizing faces in this town. He had never seen this one.

“You came with them,” Brian said. “Hidden in the group.”

“You can guess.” The man’s voice was mild, almost bored. “Does it matter? You’re dying soon.”

He said his name was Viper, or at least Fierce Scar called him that, and when he moved he moved like the name suggested — low and indirect and from angles that didn’t correspond to where his body had been a half-second before. Brian was a good swordsman. He had earned that claim honestly, practicing through every season while the rest of the patrol gambled. He was not good enough for this.

He fought back. He held ground. He bled steadily through the chest wound and felt his breath get harder and his legs get less certain, and he waited for the sound of guards in the corridor above because he had been fighting in a stone basement for long enough that someone should have heard—

“You’re waiting for the knights,” Viper said, and stopped his advance. “Stone walls. Sound doesn’t carry.” He was not breathing hard. “You can shout until you empty your lungs. No one will come.”

Brian’s guard wavered. That was all Viper needed.

The hidden crossbow made no more sound than a breath. The bolt was the length of a finger. It entered his chest and his lung went wrong all at once, and Brian threw his sword in Viper’s direction because it was the only thing he had left to throw, and then he ran, because running was still possible and staying still was not. He made it past a doorway and a threshold before his legs stopped working.

The floor came up to meet him.

He heard Fierce Scar’s voice, and felt his hair grabbed, and through the blur of the pain and the blood in his throat he thought: this is how it ends. In a warehouse. Before I made it to Sheryl. Before Greyhound was avenged.

Then: a woman’s voice. Not a voice he recognized.

“You’re playing quite lively in someone else’s house,” she said. “And intending to kill someone in front of my face. I’m not sure that’s appropriate.”

The grip on his hair released.

Through the narrowing of his vision he saw: a woman in a dark robe, patterned with three triangles and a central eye, sitting on the lid of a storage box as though she’d been there all evening. Viper attacked — fast, surgical, his best angle — and Brian watched the woman raise her arm, the motion so small it barely registered, and Viper’s arm was no longer attached to Viper.

The arm hit the floor. Viper hit the floor.

What followed Brian could not later describe coherently. He saw her move through the group the way water moves through a gap — finding the space between two people before either of them understood there was space, always somewhere other than where the sword was, always exactly where the body was. He had fought in brawls. He had watched knights drill. He had never seen anything like this. She was not defending; she was not attacking in any recognizable sense. She was simply ending it, methodically, with the economy of someone doing a task that requires attention but not effort.

When it was done she was standing in the center of the room and the others were not standing at all.

Our friend, Brian thought, very dimly, from a long way down.

Then the floor and the dark took him.

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