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Chapter 29: Fury

Brian told them what they needed to know. He had no choice.

The tunnel was real — he had found it as a child, playing in the collapsed section of ground east of the current castle site. The original castle had stood in a different location; when they’d broken ground for the foundations, the earth had given way into an underground cave. The builders had relocated the structure. Most of the old sewers had been destroyed in the collapse, but a few sections remained, sealed and forgotten and — as Brian had discovered at age nine — not entirely disconnected from the new castle’s water system. His father had beaten him for it and warned him that trespassing in a lord’s castle was a hanging offense. He had never gone back.

He had talked about it. At dinners, drinking evenings, the kind of night where you tell the stories that make you seem interesting. He had said: I could walk into the castle without anyone knowing. He had said it perhaps twenty times over ten years, and each time he’d meant it as a boast, harmless and distant.

Now Fierce Scar had his sword at Brian’s back and the boast had become the price of the night.

The abandoned well was where Brian remembered it: in the middle of the collapsed section, hidden under a decade of encroaching vegetation. The waterway beneath it had changed since his childhood — narrower, the cut vines and vine growth choking what had been a spacious passage. The man with the torch and hatchet went first, clearing a path. Brian walked third. Fierce Scar walked fourth, close enough that Brian could feel the sword at his belt without the sword touching him.

He thought about Greyhound the whole way.

They had been children together before the town was what it was. They had played in these tunnels together, in fact — Greyhound had been present the day Brian found the well connection, had held the torch while Brian lowered himself down. When Brian had proposed joining the patrol, Greyhound had followed because Brian asked him to. He had always followed Brian. And the others had voted Greyhound captain because it was an honor with no substance behind it — a captain stayed in town during the Months of the Demons to light the alarm fires, which was a job for someone they didn’t want to risk their own skin on.

They let you do it because why should I do such a dangerous task?

Fierce Scar had said this with the expression of a man sharing a joke.

Brian walked and let the rage find its shape. Grief was a disorder; rage had a geometry. He knew its dimensions by the time the sound of running water reached them, by the time the tunnel opened into the wider junction and the man with the torch looked up at the shaft overhead and said: no road forward, just the mouth of the well.

He looked up. Night sky, a small circle of stars.

Fierce Scar tested the edge of the wellhead with a grappling hook, found it solid, and went up first. The others followed. Brian last. When he climbed out into the castle garden he could see the castle itself directly in front of him — not in the distance anymore.

Fierce Scar grabbed his arm. “Warehouse. Lead us.”

They moved through the courtyard with the small torch barely illuminating their feet. The corridors inside were dark; the oil lamps had been extinguished for the night. Brian’s eyes adjusted. He knew the layout from old memory, from the one visit he’d made years ago when a friend of his father’s had worked in the castle kitchen. He catalogued what he saw: width of the corridors, the branching, the stair down to the basement.

At the fork, he moved.

Not toward the warehouse. Down the stairs.

He had perhaps two seconds before they registered the deviation. He used one of them to reach the bottom of the stairs. He used the other to put the first man’s back against the wall and the third man’s face against the floor before either one had time to shout.

In the dark and the narrow space, seven-against-one had the wrong geometry. They could only come at him one or two abreast, and Brian had been training his swordsmanship for years — alone, methodically, in the kind of committed daily practice that the rest of the patrol had found laughable. He had not found it laughable. He had found it necessary.

When Fierce Scar reached the bottom of the stairs, two of his men were not moving. Brian was standing in the center of the corridor with a borrowed sword, waiting.

“Seven against one,” Fierce Scar said. “You have no chance.”

Brian said nothing. He raised the sword and slashed, fast and diagonal. Fierce Scar parried but did not fully recover before the tip crossed into his shoulder — not deep, but through. The scarred man stumbled back with a sound of pain.

The man behind him stepped forward. Brian adjusted and held the center.

He was not going to call for help. Not yet. He had something to do first.

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