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Chapter 9: Months of the Demons (Part II)

Carter came back after the three men had gone, and Roland had expected this.

“You’re considering staying,” Carter said. Not a question.

“What would you recommend,” Roland said, “if I were?”

The Knight Commander’s face did the thing it did when he was balancing what he thought against what he was permitted to say. The balance never took long to resolve. “I would recommend strongly against it, Your Highness. The hunter’s account alone—a single mixed-variety beast defeated him, and he’s arguably the most capable fighter in this town. We have the town guard, which is not cavalry, and we have the castle guard. Against a migration of demon beasts? The only defensible position in this region is Longsong Stronghold.”

“Which has walls.”

“Yes.”

“What if we had walls?” Roland said.

Carter stopped.

“Between the north slope of the mountain and the Chishui River,” Roland said. “At the nearest point. Six hundred yards. That’s the distance. I checked the old surveys.”

“Your Highness.” Carter said this carefully, the way he said things when he wasn’t sure whether the prince was serious and didn’t want to treat a jest as a proposal. “You understand what building a wall requires.”

“Tell me.”

The knight’s expression shifted. He had apparently decided this was serious, and was now recalculating.

“Foundation work first,” Carter said. “The earth has to be compressed—layers, every two feet reinforced, or the weight will cause settling and the wall will crack and fall. Even a fieldwork earthen rampart, the simplest possible structure, takes time and labor in proportion to its length. A stone wall—” He shook his head. “Stone walls require cut stone. Cutting stone requires masons. Hundreds of masons, working the stone at the quarry before transport, and then setting it block by block at the site. Mortar between the blocks. The wall rising in sections, each section cured before building continues.” He looked at Roland steadily. “You have perhaps two and a half months until the first snow. In two and a half months, a work crew of the size this territory can assemble could not build a stone wall six hundred yards long tall enough to stop a boar-variant. Walls of that scale take years. They have always taken years.”

“Everything has always been done the way it’s always been done,” Roland said.

“Some things, yes, because they are the correct way to do them.”

“Or because no one has tried a different way.” Roland stood and walked to the window. The garden was visible from here; he could see the cottage, the fence, the pond. Anna was not outside—she’d gone in after the afternoon session. “If I told you we could build a wall with materials we already have, using a binding agent that sets harder than fired brick and doesn’t require individually cut stone—would you think it possible then?”

Carter looked at him without warmth. “I would think you were describing something that does not exist, Your Highness.”

“Everything you’ve seen since I arrived in this territory has conformed perfectly to your previous understanding of what exists,” Roland said mildly.

A pause. Carter’s jaw moved. He was thinking about the dungeon.

“If there is no wall ready when the snow comes,” Roland said, “we evacuate. I’m not throwing anyone’s life away on a plan that doesn’t work. But if it works—if I can give you a wall and enough defenders trained to use it—what are our chances?”

“A wall between the mountain and the river,” Carter said slowly. “High enough to stop a boar-variant. Manned by disciplined fighters who can hold their position.” He calculated. “Against the ordinary beasts—reasonable. Against the mixed-variety—” He stopped.

“Against the mixed-variety, we deal with them separately. Two or three per season.”

“That’s not small number, when a single one nearly killed the best hunter in this territory.”

“No. But it’s not unlimited.” Roland turned from the window. “We have Anna.”

The silence that followed was a different quality.

“I will not abandon my post,” Carter said finally—not quite at Roland, not quite at the window, somewhere between them. Then he knelt. “Your Highness. I will protect you.”


In the garden that evening, the ale was cold and tasted like autumn grain left too long. Roland sat with it in the fading light and let the quiet settle around him, and thought about limestone.

The North Mine had been running for decades—longer, maybe. Decades of extracted ore meant decades of waste rock dumped at the mine’s perimeter. Grey and coarse-grained, calcium carbonate heavy: limestone, or close enough that the difference was academic for their purposes. You calcined limestone in a kiln, drove off the carbon dioxide, were left with quicklime. You added water, got slaked lime. You mixed slaked lime with volcanic ash or fine aggregate, and under the right conditions it set—not like dried clay, which crumbled, but like something that had become stone.

Concrete. Not Portland cement, not reinforced; this was Roman concrete, the kind that hardened underwater if you let it. The Empire had built ports with it. They had built them to last.

He had perhaps two months. The calcination alone would require a kiln and fuel and labor organized in shifts. The mixing and application would require workers who had never done anything like this before, following instructions they had no framework for, under a prince they had no particular reason to trust.

The wall would not be concrete. He had spent the past hour working through the quantities and had concluded that the amount of raw limestone available—and more importantly, the time available to process it—was insufficient for a concrete structure at the scale he needed. But cement as a binding agent between fieldstones—irregular, uncut stones of the kind that were already piled at the mine entrance in enormous quantities—that was achievable. Barely. Not comfortably.

He was working through the specific problem of how to organize the processing chain when Anna said, from behind him, “Look.”

He turned.

She was standing a few feet from the cottage door, her hand raised to the level of her shoulder. In her palm—balanced there, entirely still—was a small flame.

Not rising from her feet. Not climbing her arm. Not consuming the sleeve. A flame balanced on her open hand, the tip of it swaying upward and downward in a slow rhythm, as if breathing.

She tilted her hand slightly and the flame moved—slowly, deliberate, like a child learning to walk—toward her index finger. It reached the fingertip and sat there.

It was a small thing. He knew it was a small thing in the context of what she had done in the dungeon. He knew it was a small thing in the context of what it might eventually become.

It was not a small thing.

Her eyes were on the flame, reflecting it—not performing anything, not watching him watch her, just looking at what she’d made. On the tip of her nose there was a small bead of sweat from the effort.

“You did it,” Roland said.

She looked up at him. Something in her face that was not quite a smile, but was close to the conditions that made smiles possible.

“Now try it on the iron ingot,” he said.

She looked at him, then at the ingot.

She was going to be extraordinary.

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