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Chapter 813: “Monster”

Nightingale’s view cleared.

The demonic beasts watching from the cave’s middle reaches had seen it too — that sudden bisection, the bodies separating without sound or warning, the halves floating before they fell. The swarm’s forward momentum simply stopped. They didn’t retreat exactly; they refused to advance, pulling back from the air in front of her as though the space itself had become something they could not trust.

Fear. Actual fear.

The monster on the dome waved its tentacles and roared. The sound carried authority and fury in equal measure. But the effect was diminished. Most of the swarm held its ground at a distance. Only three sickle beasts still answered the command, and they were spent — their formation broken, their numbers too few to block anything.

The defensive line was open.

Nightingale gathered what magic power remained and moved for the dome’s center.

As she closed in, she understood what Fran had meant by abnormal.

It was less a creature than an exposure — a pile of viscera without epidermis or muscular tissue to organize it, vascular cords and intestines and tentacles and organs she had no name for, all stacked together in an arrangement that looked structurally wrong in the same way a building looks wrong when its bones are on the outside. The massing of it was both vast and precarious. A castle made of guts.

Except that this castle was alive, and its walls were flexing.

Throwing the explosive into a mouth was not possible. She scanned the outer surface for something better: and there — a cluster of vibrating nodules, dense and deep-seated, resonant with flowing magic light. Not certainly a vital organ. But seated deeper than anything else, and whatever was inside that light suggested something important was housed there. The explosive detonating there would reach further than anywhere else.

One chance. One blow. Everything on it.

The monster noticed her approach and started moving.

From within its body it shot slender tentacles — some like steel whips, able to crack rock with a casual swing, but predictable enough that she could read their silhouettes in the Mist’s geometry and thread the gaps between them. Like passing through a wall; the intervals were there if you read them early enough.

The others were different. Certain tentacles carried magic power, each one a different ability, their signatures vivid and varied in the black and white world: bright colors, unmistakable. She had no desire to find out what any of them did to a person, so she used flash to stay clear of them — and each flash cost her something she didn’t have much of left.

The gap between her and the monster closed.

She stepped onto it.

The creature roared, and then, in fear of damaging itself, stopped using its tentacles freely. The relief of this was immediate and enormous. Nightingale didn’t pause to appreciate it. She opened her satchel, extracted a bag of explosive, and drove straight for the vibrating nodules.

What followed took only a moment.

She pulled the fuse. She stuffed the smoking explosive — green and acrid — along with the entire satchel into the cluster of nodules. She re-entered the Mist, hanging inverted against the dome in the Mist’s geometry. She pressed both feet against the monster’s surface and launched herself like an arrow toward the lake below.

The monster registered her motion too late. It had watched her approach with such apparent intensity, only to leave without any visible act of violence — no strike, no blade, just the abandonment of a small bag. The incomprehensibility of the action seemed to suspend its response. Its tentacles did not follow her down.

Falling in the Mist was the most dangerous state possible: airflow silhouettes could shear you apart at speed if you let the ability run. She released it, dropped into ordinary reality, and fell.

She thought of Roland.

Whenever they were testing gunpowder, he would always turn his back to the testing ground. Real warriors, he would say with a straight face, never look at an explosion. Both Agatha and she would roll their eyes, and he would ignore this with the serenity of a man who had decided something and was not going to un-decide it, as though the turning away were a private ritual that had meaning only he understood.

She smiled.

She wasn’t going to imitate him.

This had nothing to do with being a real warrior.

She simply wanted to watch.

The sound of the underground river meeting the lake rose up — and then a red light lit the ceiling of the cave, and for the first time in a place that had never known daylight, something close to dawn appeared. The darkness peeled back. Long shadows stretched across stone that had been shadowless for centuries. Light played across the surface of the lake in bright, moving waves.

Then the roar arrived —

The cave shook.

In the dazzling bloom of the explosion, she saw the monster convulse. The bloody moon that had dominated the dome winked out in half — organs erupting outward like volcanic material, flung in all directions. The region of the impact caught fire instantly, generating a thick dark smoke that billowed toward the cave ceiling.

Splash.

She hit the water.

The world went quiet — just her heartbeat, steady and fast and real.

The current caught her immediately, a powerful spiral pulling downward, forming a black hole beneath her body with the force of something that did not intend to release what it had. Any ordinary struggle against it would have been meaningless.

But she had prepared.

She released the last of her magic power — almost nothing left — and summoned the Mist one final time. The spiraling white lines of it appeared around her, and she used them as stairs, climbing against the current, each step using geometry that the lake’s physics could not undo.

By the time she reached the shore, her magic power was gone.

The aftermath hit her all at once: her brain compressed under sudden pain, vertigo, her limbs shaking beyond her ability to control them. She pulled herself up the bank.

Before consciousness left her, she saw two things: a worm breaking through the cave wall, stone parting like cloth; and a golden figure moving toward her fast, urgent, the light of the underground fire catching in the motion.


“Nightingale — is she—?”

“It’s nothing severe. Magic power exhaustion.” Agatha knelt beside her, ran a quick assessment, and handed her to the nearest God’s Punishment Witch. “You carry her. We leave now.”

When Nightingale had disappeared into the dome, the group had made a decision without needing to discuss it long: no matter what, they would advance to meet her after the explosion and give Fran all remaining food — not enough to carry everyone to safety, but perhaps enough to crawl. And when the explosion came, none of them had expected its scale.

The worm carrier trapped inside the rock wall had simply stopped moving. The rest of the swarm had scattered, as though whatever had been commanding them had abruptly lost its voice.

“Leave her to me.” Elena took Nightingale herself. The Taquila God’s Punishment Witches were quiet as they formed up, and in their quiet was something that had not been there before.

“Shouldn’t we finish it off?” Lightning stood looking at the struggling shape near the dome’s edge, her expression caught between caution and something less admissible. “It doesn’t look dead.”

“A dying beast is the most dangerous kind, and you can only carry one bag of explosive at most.” Agatha’s voice was steady, final. “When the First Army assembles, it won’t survive. Don’t risk it now.”

”…Fine.” The girl paused, then nodded.

They started for the exit. Then the monster issued a sound unlike anything it had made before — dull, wet, deep, less a roar than an exhalation from somewhere vast and interior.

The lake changed.

Under the scattered light of the dying fires, a skeleton rose from the water. Enormous. Ribbed like the hull of a ship turned inside out, its bones opening upward in a row of curved claws that reached toward the cave ceiling. The current that had swirled so violently around it did nothing to disturb it. It remained fixed and steady in the surge.

The monster released its grip on the dome.

It fell.

The skeleton received it. The impact sent waves across the lake in every direction — the underground river itself flowing backward for a moment, its current reversed by the displacement. Then the ribs began to close, curling inward around the monster, wrapping it as something precious is wrapped, and the whole structure began to sink.

The moment the skeleton touched water, the fires on the monster’s surface turned to white smoke. A sharp, pungent odor filled the cave.

In the last instant before submersion, everyone saw the eyes.

Hundreds of scarlet points, half of them gone, the remainder still dense enough to cover the submerging form entirely. And in those remaining eyes, without ambiguity — hatred. Not the blunt reactive fury of an animal in pain, but something that recognized them. Something that remembered.

Then the swirling lake closed over it, and it was gone.

As though it had never been there.

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