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Chapter 785: An Intruder

After Scroll left, the office held only the two of them.

Roland opened the half-finished textbook, meaning to complete the latter half. The quill hovered. Words did not come. For a long stretch he sat with the pen in the air and nothing on the page, his gaze drifting sideways without his permission.

Anna was working. She had been given the metal ingots earlier — their composition precisely specified — and had already cut them down to palm-sized cubes before they were delivered to the castle. Now the Blackfire was doing what the Blackfire did: carving, shaping, reducing raw material to parts with a precision no lathe could match. Several fires at once, each one a different angle, each one controlled by a fraction of Anna’s attention. To watch it was to watch something that lived at the intersection of craft and mathematics — not art exactly, but close enough that the distinction stopped mattering.

She caught him looking.

“Something wrong?” She set down the part she was examining and met his eyes, easy and unhurried.

“No.” He shook his head. “If you’d rather work in the North Slope Mountain garden, we could go.”

The corner of her mouth curved. “I don’t mind being here at all. I can finish this anywhere. What matters is being with you.”

It was the kind of thing that might color a maid’s cheeks. From Anna it arrived without ceremony — simply true, and stated, and done. Roland dropped the subject.

He had known her longer than anyone else in this world. Longer, in a sense, than he had known himself here. Beyond the academic discussions and the rare, quiet conversations in the dark, Anna was mostly silent — particularly when she was working — and he had never experienced that silence as emptiness. Silence between them had its own texture, its own content. Sometimes a single glance across the room carried more than a full exchange of words.

He gave up on the textbook. He put down the quill and simply looked at her.

Her hair had grown since he’d first known her, and it fell across her shoulders now, ash-brown and soft, leaving only a thin strip of pale neck visible at the side. Her eyes were still the same particular shade of blue — lake water in open sky. The sweater was pale yellow, slightly puffy; the flannel trousers were black and comfortable. He had designed both himself, and the satisfaction of seeing her wear them had not diminished.

The Blackfire moved and the metal yielded, and part by part the pile beside her grew. Each piece would travel to the plant eventually and become one component among thousands — a gear, a housing, a fitting — and the machine would not know or care how it had come to be so precisely made. But Roland did.

The girl who had once practiced fire control alone in the castle garden had become something he couldn’t have predicted, and yet something that felt entirely continuous with who she had always been. The same steadiness. The same patience with hard things.

The day ran out without either of them noticing.


Roland fell asleep with Anna curled against him, and the other world woke up.

He turned to the calendar on his nightstand.

Saturday, October 14th.

Time ran faster here than in the real world — this he had long since accepted. But he didn’t come every night; as long as he wasn’t dreaming, the world simply waited. It had no urgency. It asked nothing.

Breakfast was ready in the living room. Zero was already at the table, working through a fried dough stick with the focus of someone who had long since decided that adults’ schedules were their own problem.

“Why are you so late?”

“It’s Saturday.” Roland disappeared into the bathroom and picked up his mug and toothbrush. “Grown people sleep in on weekends.”

From the table, just barely loud enough to carry: “Nightlife. Comes home earlier than me and calls it nightlife. This old grumpy uncle has no friends, no career, nothing going on…”

Roland nearly choked on mouthwash. He examined his reflection. Twenty-three, maybe twenty-four. Undershirt and shorts — not elegant, but hardly the picture of dereliction she was painting. He decided against making her argument for her.

“I’m going out later,” he called. “I’ll leave the spare key. Let me in when I’m back.”

“Got it!”

By the time he’d finished washing up, Zero had retreated to her room. Roland settled at the table and turned on the TV. He had an appointment — Garcia, the application to the Martialist Association, the last avenue open to him after months of fruitless searching through the Apartment of Souls.

He’d obtained most of what he needed: textbooks, materials, shoved into the bedroom in stacks. The copying work remained. But the search for memory fragments had stalled. No tenant in the building would rent him a room, and acquiring the funding to change that meant either status or capital — and both of those paths ran through the Association.

Garcia had been clear about the terms. The association compensated well for Fallen Evil hunts. For an Awakened with real power, they offered full support. When she’d described the payment, her expression had made plain that she personally found the money irrelevant. She killed Fallen Evils because they were a danger to ordinary people.

Roland had been appropriately admiring of her convictions, and then had asked for the specifics of the compensation structure.

The whole thing felt slightly too organized, too neatly purposed, for him to trust it entirely. But it was the last door he could see, so he straightened his suit, checked the time, and went out.

He had barely cleared the doorway when a scream came from behind him.

Zero.

He turned. She shot out of room 0825, white-faced and rigid with terror, nothing in her hands.

“What happened? Is there a mouse?”

She grabbed his sleeve. “There’s someone in there.”

“Someone —” He leaned into the doorway and went still.

In the center of the living room — empty a moment ago, Roland was certain of it — stood a woman he did not know.

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