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Chapter 713: A Better Performance

She was half a block from the square when she heard footsteps behind her — fast, light, specific. The kind that were aimed at someone.

“Mrs. Lannis! Please — Mrs. Lannis!”

It took her a moment to realize they meant her. She’d been May for long enough that the new name still arrived a half-beat late. She turned.

The girl was seventeen, perhaps eighteen, running in a way that said she’d committed to this before fully deciding to. Hair tied up in two round loops on either side of her head, cheeks reddened by the cold, wearing cotton-padded clothes and leather boots that were clearly new — good quality, well-fitted. Two years ago May would have read that as a merchant family’s daughter. Now she simply noted it; Neverwinter had enough people who could afford new clothes that appearance no longer mapped reliably to status.

The girl arrived, slightly breathless, and extended one of the two salted fish she’d been carrying under her arm.

“Mrs. Lannis — this is for you. A small token. Please accept it.”

May looked at the fish. Looked at the girl. “A token of what?”

“I’ve wanted to meet you for so long. If my father had seen your show—” She stopped, regrouped. “He would have been so proud.”

“I don’t know you,” May said, gently enough. “Or your father. Could you explain?”

It took the better part of half an hour to understand it properly.

The girl’s name was Jasmine. Her father had served in the First Army and been killed during the campaign against the Church. He’d left her and her mother, and City Hall’s compensation — the lump sum and the recruitment priority for surviving family members — had kept them from destitution, but not from the grief. She’d carried the grief for a long time, she said. Until The Hero’s Life.

In the play, every soldier who died protecting their family and their kingdom was given the title. His Majesty’s words, spoken through the character’s mouth, made it official. Permanent.

“My mother said he was only ever a hunter before,” Jasmine said. “She never imagined he’d receive something like that. She told me: if you ever meet the people who made that play, thank them.” She bowed, a full and earnest bow. “People call me the daughter of a hero now. It makes me feel that he’s still somewhere. That he didn’t just disappear.” She straightened. “If the First Army took women, I’d have signed up with a flintlock already.”

“You might be killed,” May said. She said it softly, but she said it.

Jasmine nodded. Then shook her head. “In the old winters, every family from our area moved to Longsong Stronghold. Every year. People died on the road — you’d hear something fall into the Redwater and know what it was. At the slums, after the heavy snow, the streets had frozen bodies in them. I was terrified every winter. Every time I closed my eyes I thought: I could be next.”

A pause. Then, with the precision of someone who has thought it through enough times that it has become simple:

“Someone has to stand up and fight for something different. I don’t want to live like that again.”

May recognized the line. It was from the play.

What she felt, hearing it come from this girl’s mouth in the snow outside the market, was something she didn’t have a technical term for. Not quite surprise. Closer to the particular sensation of having said something and then, months later, understanding for the first time what it meant.

“I’ll accept your gift,” May said.

Jasmine smiled with her whole face, turned, and ran off down a side street, waving once before she disappeared.

May stood holding the salted fish and thought about Kajen Fels.

She’d studied under him for two years at the King’s City Grand Theater — the best training she’d ever received, delivered by a man who was unfailingly unpleasant in the giving of it. She’d asked him once: what was the best performance?

Make them forget they’re watching a performance. Make them believe that what they’re watching is real — that it’s a life, not a role. If you can achieve that, you’ve done everything there is to do.

She’d spent the years after that chasing perfect execution. Absolute command of the craft — the timing, the gesture, the precise calibration of emotion against expression. When she was twenty-five she’d become a name in King’s City. Western Region girl, Grand Theater lead, someone whose name was spoken alongside the people who’d built careers in the capital.

She’d been sure she understood what Kajen Fels meant.

The Hero’s Life had not been a perfect production. The script had arrived faster than any they’d ever staged; they’d rehearsed for two weeks and been performing while still fixing blocking errors. She’d forgotten lines. She’d used the wrong facial expression at a crucial moment in the second act. She’d performed a grief she’d had to imagine rather than remember, which any experienced theater person would have been able to see in the seams of it.

And when the lead actor delivered the line — because it is worth fighting for — the square had responded with a sound she had never heard from a King’s City audience. Not applause. Something rawer. Collective and instinctive, the sound of a crowd recognizing something that was also true about themselves.

In King’s City, audiences watched performances. They saw the actor; they watched the character; they appreciated the skill. The space between the theater and the audience’s own life was the necessary distance that made art possible.

Here, that distance had closed. The audience saw themselves — their dead fathers, their frozen streets, their fear, their hope for something different. They weren’t watching a story. They were watching the story.

Maybe that was the best performance. Not the most technically precise. The most true.


Irene was on her feet before May had set the basket down.

“You’re back — perfect timing! Carter is going to reserve seats for us at the cannon exercise. Come with us—”

“Go where?” May put the fish in the kitchen, out of the way of the mushrooms.

“The exercise! The open cannon drill! There’s already a queue at City Hall, Carter says by tomorrow—”

“Not interested.” May didn’t look up. “I’d rather read my script.”

“Just come with me—” Irene appeared in the kitchen doorway with the expression of someone who has decided to deploy sustained warmth rather than argument. “Just once. Just this one time. Won’t you?”

May put the mushrooms in water and turned around.

Irene’s affection was genuine, which was the problem with refusing her. You couldn’t decline it the way you declined a formal social obligation. It was real, offered openly, and rejecting it felt like something different than declining an invitation.

She thought of Jasmine. Of the sound the square had made.

Fighting and killing aren’t always terrible and unbearable. Maybe understanding how the soldiers actually felt — what the artillery sounded like, what it looked like from the outside — would give her something the next role didn’t have yet. A texture she couldn’t imagine from a script alone.

She did not admit any of this.

“Fine.” She sighed, in the manner of someone making a significant concession. “If you insist, I suppose I have no choice.”

Yes! Wonderful!” Irene seized her arm. “Carter will be so pleased—”

“I’m doing this for the work.” May extracted her arm and straightened her coat with dignity. “Pure research. A sacrifice in the service of a better performance.”

Irene beamed at her.

May looked away before she could smile back.

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