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Chapter 555: The Beginning of the Negotiation

Border Town. No—City of Neverwinter.

Edith paused at the foot of the gangway and looked, and what she had expected to find—a prosperous provincial capital, impressive for the west, modest by real standards—was simply not there. What was there instead: a harbor three times the size of the king’s city’s docks running at capacity in both directions, sorted crowds moving through official checkpoints without bribery, an atmosphere of purposeful activity so pervasive it had its own sound.

She had made assumptions. She had been wrong.

The arriving side of the docks was all mountains of coal and ore and the constant noise of unloading. The departing side held ten paddle steamers launching together, their crews in matching uniforms standing along the rails in straight lines while citizens filled the embankment to watch them go. The sailors’ faces wore an expression she had seen before—on knights returning from victory. But these were not knights.

Victor materialized beside her, looking at the dock with the slightly injured expression of someone who has arrived to find the building twice as large as when he left. “The dock wasn’t this wide last autumn,” he said. “There weren’t this many people either.”

“What are those men in black doing at the barrier?” Cole asked. His hand was already drifting toward his coin purse.

“Checking papers and running health inspections,” Victor said. “They don’t take payments. I was as surprised as you the first time.”

Cole lowered his hand.

Victor guided them to the merchant queue. Papers checked, nothing paid, passage granted without remark. Cole looked back at the line they had bypassed and said nothing.

“I’m heading to the Holy Mountain Hotel, then the Convenience Market,” Victor said to Edith. His warmest smile. “If you need anything while you’re settling in—”

“You’ve been extraordinary.” She gave him the curtsy that ended conversations: measured lift of skirt, eyes meeting his at precisely the right duration. “The City Hall will have records for my search. I’ll be quite all right.” She held the expression through two more offered assists, and when he finally turned away with his maid behind him, she was already walking.

“Sister,” Cole said, keeping pace. He caught himself. “Miss Edith. He’d have been useful.”

“He’d have been a problem at the castle gate.” She did not slow. “We don’t need escorts who want something in return when we’re conducting state business.”

“We’re not doing this under assumed names anymore?”

“We never had the time for a long game. His Majesty returned to the Western Region early—everything has been off the original track since.” She looked at the street ahead—wide, flagged, organized by function in a way that spoke of deliberate planning. “We go to the castle. Present the credentials. Show our sincerity before they dismiss us as minor envoys.”

“But we don’t have the heads.”

“Then we proceed without them.” She was already calculating. “Two rotten heads would have been a liability at this point anyway.” She glanced at him. “Don’t write to father yet.”

”…Yes, Miss Edith.”


Guard Sean reported to Roland with the barely contained excitement of a man who believes he is witnessing history: an emissary from the Northern Region, claiming to be Cole Kant, second son of Duke Calvin Kant, bearing authentic documents and the Kant family seal, presenting his father’s pledge of loyalty.

Roland set the design drawings aside.

Northern Region. Timothy’s territory. A willing pledge.

He turned it over and found it troubling rather than satisfying. He did not need federal lords—he needed territory administered directly by the City Hall, taxes flowing to one account, military service consolidated. A surrendered lord with conditions attached was, in some ways, harder to absorb than a defeated one. And if one noble house sent emissaries pledging loyalty and he accepted the gesture without enforcing the new regulations, every watching lord from the east would conclude cooperation offered some preservation of privileges that resistance would not.

He could not refuse to see them, either. If he sent nobles away unheard, the houses that were still deciding would quietly begin arming. The citizens of the Eastern and Northern Regions were people he intended to govern. He did not want them paying for noble anxieties he could have defused.

“Bring them to the living room. Have Barov stay.”

Sean acknowledged and left, still visibly pleased.

One day he’ll understand why this is complicated, Roland thought. Maybe.

He fixed his position before he stood. Whatever they offered, whatever argument they made: the feudal rights would be retrieved. That was not negotiable. The mechanism could be discussed. The destination could not. He would say so plainly, and they would either agree or not, and the kingdom would proceed either way.


Two people sat at the long table. Cole Kant—young, properly dressed, visibly working to appear more comfortable than he was. And a woman Roland had assigned the role of assistant at first glance, then revised upward by the time he crossed the room. She was poised without performance, composed without stiffness. Her stillness had a quality Cole’s did not: it was active, not simply calm.

More interesting than he is.

Cole stood and bowed. “Your Majesty, I bring my father’s regards. The Duke of the Northern Region has a gift for you.”

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