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Chapter 457: The Music of Fantasy

“You don’t need to come with me.”

Echo walked along the Redwater River, the snow crunching under her boots with each step.

“The city isn’t safe here.” Iron Axe kept two paces behind her. “It’s not Border Town. His Highness told me to stay with you if you left the castle without another witch.”

“I shouldn’t have told him,” she muttered, her breath dissolving into the cold air. “And you don’t need to call me lady anymore.”

“You will always be the head of the Osha clan in my heart, my lady Drow Silvermoon.”

At the word Osha, she went quiet. Iron Axe couldn’t see her expression from behind, but he felt the silence settle differently — heavier, with something in it that he didn’t know how to address. He wanted to say something. He didn’t know what. He kept walking.

The stretch of river here was different from the inner-city branch, which ran straight and disciplined between masoned levees. This one curved through the fields beyond the walls, wide and unhurried, with stone-lined banks and cut-in stairways every ten steps where people came to draw water. The snowfall today was light. A few pedestrians moved along the path, and when they looked at Echo — at her height, the blue-gray hair, the sand-pale skin rare in these inland territories — their gazes lingered.

“Other side,” Echo said.

“Yes.”

They crossed a frozen arch bridge, stepping carefully on the ice, and came out into the eastern quarter: almost no houses here, only broad farmland blanketed in white, and in the far distance the city wall rising like a dark smudge against the pale sky. Open. Quiet. A different Stronghold from the one they’d just left.

“Nothing like Iron Sand City,” Echo said, mostly to herself. “When I was in the Southernmost Region, I assumed the whole world was sand. Water and oases were what you killed for. Here—” She stopped for a moment, watching the river move under its skin of ice. “Here you just walk down and drink.”

“Here you fight for other things,” Iron Axe said. “Gold royals. Jewels. Honor. Status. The fighting doesn’t go away.”

“Nightingale told me our prince would end it.” She looked up at the grey overcast, not quite expecting an answer from the sky. “Everyone equal — the Sand Nation, the Four Kingdoms, ordinary people, witches. She said he’d make it real.”

Iron Axe was quiet for a moment. He tried to imagine it honestly and found the seam where his faith in the prince ended and his understanding of the world began. His Highness had the strength of gods; that much was beyond doubt. But willing submission was something else. You could conquer a man. You could not easily conquer what he believed he was owed.

“Do you want to go back to Iron Sand City?” Echo asked.

“No.” He didn’t hesitate. “I swore to the Three Gods that I’d serve His Highness Roland Wimbledon and help him expand his dominion. You’ll go back someday, my lady — when His Highness has kept his promise to you. No one will disrespect you then.”

“But I don’t want to be the head of the Osha clan,” she said, very quietly. “I want to stay somewhere the trees stay green. I want to stay with Wendy and Nightingale. I want His Highness to teach me more songs.” A pause. “I’d like to go back one day and look. But I don’t want to live in the desert and fight for water every season.”

“No one can force you,” Iron Axe said. He didn’t say the rest.


They reached an open field beyond the last farmhouses and Echo stopped.

“Here. I won’t disturb anyone.”

She usually practiced in the castle’s rear courtyard. Today she’d chosen this open ground deliberately — there were important negotiations with the nobles, and the last thing she wanted was her practice carrying through the walls into whatever careful moment His Highness was managing.

Iron Axe stepped back two paces. “I’ll stand watch.”

She turned. “I wrote a song. For our homeland.” Her expression had changed — no longer the quiet preoccupation of the walk, but something more open. “Do you want to hear it?”

“A song?”

“His Highness taught me to layer instruments — the arrangement method. You take different sounds and stack them, each one adding something the last one didn’t have.” She said this easily, the pleasure of it evident. “I tried it and couldn’t believe how it changed things. I didn’t know music could work that way. He gave the techniques the strangest names — ‘electric sound’, ‘agricultural heavy metal.’” A small smile. “Only he could invent those.”

“Prince Roland has always been singular,” Iron Axe said. The Gods had marked him; that was the only explanation that held.

Before he could say more, Echo closed her eyes and began.

The first notes reached him and he stopped moving. Just — stopped. Every thought in his body went still.

It sounded like sand touching water. Like something deep in the earth answering something up in the air. The sounds were layered the way she’d described, each voice distinct, each one lending the others a fullness they couldn’t have alone.

The field disappeared.

Iron Axe was standing in desert. The sun was enormous and close. Beneath his feet: not snow, not mud, but the dry edge of an oasis, the water shallow enough that he could see his reflection wavering. And there was Echo in the shallow water ahead of him, eyes closed, her voice carrying across the sand in every direction, and beyond her, nothing — only dunes to the horizon, burning and still.

Going through sand and dust to seek the traces of the oasis. Your footprints were left in the sea of sand. Your shadow was reflected in the spring.

Someday the oases will become the new deserts and the deserts will breed new oases. The only eternal thing is the legend of you.

Someday I’ll follow your footprints to find your shadow at the sleepless and wordless moment before dawn.

When the song ended, Iron Axe was standing in the snow outside Longsong Stronghold. Wind moved over the white field. The city wall rose dark in the distance. Nothing had changed.

He swallowed. Then he opened his hand, the one that had been hanging at his side.

A single grain of transparent sand lay in his palm, catching the winter light.

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