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Chapter 244: Identity Registration

Outside the western city wall, under the direction of the First Army, six thousand refugees were moving through an identification inspection unlike anything the Western Territory had seen before.

Barov understood by now that what His Highness prized most was not gold, not land, not weapons. It was people. The Prince had spent more than two thousand gold royals to bring this crowd back from King’s City — charter fees, transportation, provisions for half a month at sea. Barov had nearly climbed the wall when Margaret’s chamber of commerce presented the final bill. That sum equaled four steam engines. If the deposit for two ship conversions had not arrived the previous month, this month’s ledger would have shown a deficit.

And now the cumbersome task of accounting for every one of them had landed squarely on Barov’s desk. Every City Hall official, every literate apprentice, had been dispatched to the wooden sheds and queuing lines. Watching the long columns of refugees inch forward through the checkpoints, Barov felt, not unpleasantly, as though he were watching a procession of moving coins.

His own line — the specialists’ queue — was comparatively quiet. Fifty or sixty people had come through in the time the common lines had processed hundreds.

“I am… a carpenter,” a middle-aged man said, arriving at the table. “I heard that craftsmen receive their own living quarters?”

“That is correct.” Seney Darley — former Wolf Family knight, now borrowed from the Ministry of Agriculture — kept his pen ready. “Your name? Can you read?”

The reassignment had worked out better than expected. The man made no mistakes. Barov approved of him.

“My name is Maser, sir.” A hesitation. “I cannot read.”

“You cannot read or write?”

“No, sir.”

“Very well — as a carpenter, then…” Sirius flipped through the pile of trade-specific question sheets until he found the right one. “Let me ask you a few things.”

The preliminary examination method was His Highness’s own invention. He had gathered craftsmen from every trade, questioned them on specialized knowledge and practical problems, recorded their answers, and produced a standardized set of questions. Compare any claimant’s answers against the form, and deception became visible within two or three questions. Barov had never seen anything like it, and his first instinct — despite himself — had been something close to admiration. Most civilians would not know the specialized vocabulary, let alone the texture of the work.

“What tool is used to flatten a wooden surface?”

“A carpenter’s plane, sir.”

“What are the commonly used saws?”

“Frame saws and two-man saws. Hand saws for smaller cuts.”

Several questions later, Maser’s voice had found its rhythm — each answer coming a little more smoothly than the last. Sirius reached for the register.

“Wait.” Barov spoke before the pen touched paper. Then, to Maser: “Stretch out your hands.”

Confusion crossed the man’s face. He complied.

Barov looked at the palms. Rough and cracked, yellowed with dried earth, thick calluses at the base of every finger.

“A carpenter’s palms should not be this rough,” he said, not unkindly — this was explanation, not accusation, and there was a distinction. “The lower pads especially, from constant contact with wood, should be smooth and hardened, not split like field work. Carpenters also work frequently with black marking paint. Their palms tend to be dark-stained, not yellow.” He indicated the man’s hands. “Beyond that — he paused before each answer, breaking eye contact. Someone recalling unfamiliar knowledge does that. A working carpenter would have answered without thinking.”

Sirius’s eyes went wide.

Barov looked at Maser directly. “You heard the First Army’s warnings when they brought you here. Impersonation, deception, or refusal to register — punished by labor in the mines or expulsion from the Western Territory. With that in mind, are you still a carpenter?”

Maser dropped to his knees. “No, sir, I was wrong! My neighbor was a carpenter — I only watched him work!”

“Go stand in the other line.”

When the man had fled, Sirius asked, with the open wondering expression of someone who has just seen a thing he cannot account for: “Sir. How do you know all this?”

“During the Months of Demons I conducted a census for His Highness,” Barov answered, permitting himself to sound unconcerned about it. “I dealt with every carpenter in the town. I recorded these things at the time.” He turned back to the forms.

He could feel the admiration in the knight’s expression without looking at it, and permitted himself a private moment of satisfaction. The Prince’s examination system was clever. But no system, however clever, could substitute for the kind of knowledge that came only from direct experience and careful observation. For that, one needed someone like Barov.

Though he was honest enough with himself to note, privately, that His Highness’s influence had already changed how he thought about situations like this one. The old response to a fraud was a swift and public punishment — visible enough to discourage others. But now he had to let this one go. Presumably the Prince’s reasoning was financial: every refugee represented a return on a significant investment. Breaking them against a post before they’d contributed anything would simply have been burning his own gold royals.

When the next legitimate craftsman cleared the specialized examination, Sirius glanced up at Barov rather than writing immediately.

Barov sized the man up. Nodded. “Write him in. I’ll bring him to see His Highness.”

Through the passage in the city wall, the last checkpoint was a shed erected for the Prince himself. It was there that each candidate received His Highness’s direct inquiry, and if confirmed, was issued a Resident Identity Card: a sheet of laminated hard paper, palm-sized, with a painted portrait in the upper left corner, the bearer’s name, address, and number in the center, and on the reverse, Graycastle’s crest and Roland’s personal seal.

Barov had his own card. He had examined it carefully when it was issued and could not account for the material — neither soaking in water nor fire damaged it in any way. That was the witch Soraya’s doing, evidently. It appeared His Highness intended to extend the card system to the whole town eventually, using it as the basis for purchases and payments.

The same witch whose young-lady face had appeared on that stage today, receiving a medal in front of two thousand people.

Barov considered this as he walked. Since the Award and Honor Ceremony, the question he had been deferring — the Church or the Devil — had been quietly resolving itself. He had spent years dismissing His Highness as a footnote. He was finding it increasingly difficult to maintain that position. Border Town’s population had already surpassed Longsong Stronghold’s. Next year’s construction plan would connect the two settlements into a single city larger than King’s City — the most magnificent city in Graycastle, if His Highness’s vision could be believed.

And the City Hall Premier Minister would hold his position in the center of all of it.

There was still a long way to go, naturally. Much could change. But within his chest, quiet and persistent, was something he recognized after a moment as hope — for the first time in quite a while.

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