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Chapter 1203: A Black Present

Jean Bate moved fast. By that same afternoon he had opened half the mansion’s rooms to the army and dispatched maids to serve the officers — an offer Iron Axe declined on grounds of operational security.

The young officers of the General Staff received this news with obvious reluctance. Iron Axe looked at their faces and said, without warmth, “Time to work. Your performance on this campaign is subject to Edith Kant’s review. You know the consequences of errors.”

The name landed like a boot on a table. Everyone straightened. The room filled immediately with the sound of papers shuffled, maps pinned, schedules cross-checked, inventory tallied.

“Look at those young fellows,” Remy observed, shaking his head. “Always full of energy. The baron seems to have seen through them.”

“A common trick among nobles,” Iron Axe said, frowning. “He’d better put that cleverness to work on the immigration campaign.”

“The Administrative Office will keep an eye on him,” Remy promised. “Now — we’ve cleared our first obstacle. Easier than I expected. The Tusk and Redstone Gate families actually helped us by giving us an obvious target. It won’t be so clean going forward.”

“It will be exactly the same,” Iron Axe said.

Remy blinked. “Really?”

Iron Axe turned to look through the window. The heavy overcast had broken slightly, a pale rift of light over the bay. “Because they’ve fallen behind.”


Because they’ve fallen behind. It was Edith’s phrase, spoken a week before his departure.

He had met her at the General Staff offices in Neverwinter, a secretary beside them taking minutes, the meeting convened to determine how best to execute the immigration plan efficiently. Edith had set down her tea and said it plainly: “Most nobles haven’t noticed the changes taking place in this world. They’re still dwelling on personal interests, gloating over their wealth and their rivalries, seeing nothing outside that frame. You plan to fight them one by one, don’t you.”

“If they impede His Majesty’s plan, yes.”

“Too slow.” Edith had not softened it. “This campaign isn’t the Graycastle unification war. We need troops garrisoned in multiple foreign cities at once. As time passes you’ll have fewer soldiers available, which prolongs the campaign — and those nobles won’t openly resist you, but they’ll undermine you in every other way possible. By the time you’ve noticed the damage and raced back to fix it, it will reflect badly on His Majesty.”

“Then what should I do?”

She had slid a table across the desk.

It was a grid — items on one axis, a numerical scale on the other.

“What is this?” Iron Axe had never seen its like.

“A threat evaluation form. Or a resistance-level index. The name doesn’t matter. I built it from nobles’ behavioral patterns and weighted factors: gender, heirs, domain size, troop count, past conduct, and so on. Fill it out and you have a rough portrait of any lord before you’ve met them. The more information you can gather, the more accurate the picture. The situation in Wolfheart and Everwinter has shifted too much for the General Staff to pre-complete the forms — if you encounter a city that isn’t already listed, fill in the data and run the calculation yourself.”

Iron Axe had skimmed the columns. “And then?”

“If the total score falls below fifty, the city has limited reach and limited ambition. Build an alliance with them. Local lords can give you maps, demographics, city layouts, population data — more than you’d think. Local cooperation accelerates the whole plan.” Edith had paused, a finger tracing the edge of the table. “For those that score above fifty — don’t waste time. Whether they show signs of yielding or not, crush them immediately.”

The bluntness of it had stopped him. A simple scoring table, and a woman who had never met these people would have their fates settled before the ships had even docked.

After a moment, Iron Axe had asked, “Is the form accurate?”

He understood efficiency in a way that went beyond tactics. Most of the ships had been borrowed from the Fjord Chambers of Commerce. The clock on that arrangement was running regardless of whether the demons moved on the Impassable Mountain Range. Speed was not a luxury.

Edith sipped her tea. “There will be errors at the margins, and I can’t promise fifty is the exact right threshold. Given limited time, I’ll leave the fine adjustments to your discretion. The General Staff counsels. It doesn’t command.”

He had turned to the final page and found a list of cities Edith had already graded using information obtained from the Kingdom of Dawn. The city scoring lowest below the threshold — the most cooperative prospect on the entire list — was the Sedimentation Bay. Their first stop.

Before leaving, he had asked one last question. “Are there no nobles who haven’t fallen behind?”

Edith had smiled and run her fingers through her hair. “Of course there could be. But in that case, you’d recognize him without the form. He would have to be something like me.”


Iron Axe emerged from his reverie and walked toward the First Army’s camp.

As Edith had predicted, the nobles were not the problem. The problem was moving civilians — thousands of them — in an orderly, efficient sequence without panic or chaos.

Within two days, the Sedimentation Bay docks were packed. Not hundreds of people. Thousands, pressing toward the gangplanks, rucksacks and bundles, children on shoulders, the whole grinding mass of people who had decided something was more dangerous than the unknown.

Iron Axe stared. Jean Bate stared. Even Remy, who had drafted the immigration procedures, stared.

“Did you exaggerate His Majesty’s promises?” Iron Axe asked.

“No.” Remy shook his head vigorously. “I followed the Administrative Office’s procedures without deviation. The volume depends on how many people the local lord could persuade — and given the baron’s standing here, I estimated three hundred to five hundred.”

“It’s twenty times that.”

Good news, clearly. But the sheer unexpectedness of it unsettled Iron Axe. Graycastle was distant and foreign. Citizens of Wolfheart had no reason to trust it, no framework for the hope it was offering. Someone had clearly tipped the scales — had worked the towns and villages before the First Army arrived, had pushed people off their foundations and pointed them toward the docks.

“There’s only one explanation,” Remy said, after a moment of thought. “They’re all refugees.”

Refugees owned no home to lose. Show them a door and they’d walk through it.

“But these people are freemen. Villages and towns near the bay.”

“Yes, but my men picked up some interesting rumors when they went out to those towns.” Remy’s voice was careful now, deliberately neutral. “The Redstone Gate Family — who hold an old grudge against the baron — were said to be planning to enslave the local population once they seized the bay. Another rumor: a creature in the northern mountains. Takes humans. Devours them. Towns already ravaged, remains on the roads, the thing moving southeast. There were others like it — specific, convincing, designed to perturb.” He spread his hands. “People left because if they stayed, they’d become refugees anyway. Better to leave now on your own terms.”

Iron Axe stared at him. “When did this start?”

“At least six weeks ago. Not long after we left Neverwinter.” Remy almost smiled. “Aren’t we lucky?”

Not luck. Iron Axe said nothing, but the thought was cold and hard. Someone had known the purpose of the First Army, had known it weeks before the fleet landed, and had begun seeding panic into the countryside on Graycastle’s behalf. A friend? A foe working toward the same end for entirely different reasons? Both possibilities were uncomfortable.

He had no answer.

Then a soldier appeared in the doorway.

“Sir. Someone asked me to give you this.”

Iron Axe took the envelope. “Who?”

“He didn’t leave a name. Small fellow, sir. Said the letter was passed to him by someone else — he wasn’t the original sender. I already checked it. Nothing inside but the letter.”

It was a burlap envelope, the cheap kind sold in any market stall. Not sealed with wax — just folded shut, almost carelessly. Iron Axe opened it.

The letter inside was written on black, refined paper. Not the kind of paper civilians could obtain.

He turned it over. A single line, printed in gold:

This is a present from your most loyal servant. I hope you like it.

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