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Chapter 101: The Ancient Book and the Traces It Gives (Part 2)

He read the next line.

The Devils grew each day in number. Every day we became fewer.

God’s Stone of Retaliation was unable to stop them. It would work against their unnatural powers, yes — but even without those powers, they were terrible enemies.

The Holy City of Taquila has fallen. We have scattered in all directions — over the mountains, across the rivers, fleeing as far from the Gates of Hell as we are able.

But where next? Where is there left to go?

It doesn’t matter. It is not something I need to decide. I am going to die, Natalia.

The Devil’s corruption is inside me now, and nothing we have is slowing it.

I am writing this down because I have one request to leave you.

Alice’s test of the God’s Punishment Army is nearly complete. The test was a success — even facing the extraordinary Devil Warriors, they have nothing to fear. But she has forgotten the essential point: even if the God’s Punishment Army wins, that victory will not belong to us.

The God’s Punishment Army will be our end.

To stop her, only you remain.

Roland set the book down and closed his eyes.

He ran through it twice more from the beginning — the full readable section, the whole arc of it — and then he tried to see it from Cara’s perspective. Tried to see it from the inside of a worldview that had no category for actual alien creatures, no framework that included the possibility that “the Devil” was a species rather than a theology.

Assume Cara read this and had no knowledge of the wildlands creatures. Assume she processed “Devil” as the Church’s word for witches — which it was, in every public discourse she had ever encountered. Work from there.

Then the text read differently. A Church member, fleeing from witches who were growing stronger while the Church’s warriors dwindled. The God’s Stone suppressing their powers but not stopping them entirely. A Holy City — Taquila — fallen to their advance. The author dying of something the Church’s medicines couldn’t treat.

And at the end: a warning about an army being built to fight back. An army that would win but deliver victory to the wrong hands.

To someone who had spent her life being called the devil’s instrument, this would have read as revelation. The Church had been losing, for centuries, to the people they called witches, and they had been hiding it. They had built their theology of persecution on top of a history of defeat.

I can see why she thought what she thought, Roland acknowledged.

But the holes were significant. The text said the enemy possessed “strange powers” beyond what ordinary people had — but witches could be blocked by God’s Stones, and a God’s Stone would only partially suppress these creatures. The text made it sound like partial suppression was all you could manage. That didn’t fit. And the note about the enemy’s numbers growing daily didn’t fit either — witches were born, not multiplied, and the Church had been burning them in quantity for generations.

She was probably so eager that she stopped examining her own reading, Roland thought. Or there was content he still couldn’t parse — the corrupted passages, the missing middle sections — that had made it seem more coherent to her than it looked to him now.

It didn’t matter. What mattered was what the text actually said.

And what the text actually said was this: a Holy City called Taquila — a name he had never seen in any history book he’d read — had been lost to an enemy that grew in number while the Church’s forces dwindled. The God’s Stone of Retaliation had worked only partially against them. The survivors had scattered.

And someone, in the final hours of their life, had written a warning about a weapon being developed to fight back.

He opened his eyes and read the passage again.

Even if the God’s Punishment Army will win, this victory will not belong to us.

The God’s Punishment Army will be our end.

He only knew the Church’s Army of Judges — the God’s Punishment Army he had never heard of. Of course, that didn’t rule out that the former fourth prince had simply been ignorant. But if they really could raise warriors strong enough to fight whatever the text described — this enemy with numbers that grew while the Church’s fell — then why would the author consider it a catastrophe? If it won, why would that victory not belong to them?

He didn’t have enough information to answer that. He wasn’t sure he had enough information to even frame the question correctly.

He stood, moved to the window. The back garden was below him: twelve witches in various stages of their morning training. Lily was working on a tray of vegetables, methodical. Mystery Moon sat in the grass with a pile of smooth stones. Soraya was sketching something he couldn’t make out from this angle.

“Nightingale.”

“Still here.” The dried fish was gone; she was watching the garden too, from somewhere behind him.

“Cara found this book in the east. How?”

A pause. “When I joined the Association, they were already walking. But Wendy told me the beginning.” Nightingale shifted; he heard the couch creak. “It started in the Sea Wind Region — Cara, Wendy, Scroll, a handful of others. They found what they thought was a safe meeting place, a hollow in a forest. And they found something they hadn’t expected: an entrance to a ruin below the ground.”

“Below the forest.”

“Cara went down alone. She didn’t tell anyone what she found, or not fully. When she came back up, she had the book. Not long after that, the Church somehow learned the location and came in force. Less than half of them escaped.” Nightingale’s voice was flat, reporting. “That was when Cara decided on the Holy Mountain. Built the Association around it. Everything that followed.”

Roland turned it over. A buried ruin in the eastern forests of Graycastle, old enough that no current history acknowledged it. Taquila — the Holy City that the book’s author had watched fall. Could they be the same site?

Possibly. Probably.

I would need to go there, he thought, and it’s entirely impossible right now. The journey across the kingdom, the political situation, the campaign against Longsong Stronghold that had to come first. He filed it under necessary future problems and made a note in his margin.

He looked back out the window. The garden, the witches, the ordinary industrious morning.

Twelve of them now. Which meant it was finally time to formalize the structure.

He had been thinking about this. He didn’t want a military hierarchy — that created the wrong incentives and the wrong dependencies. He didn’t want a guild structure, too much internal politics. What he wanted was something closer to a professional association: a framework for coordination and accountability that didn’t pretend to be something else.

Two rules. He had it down to two.

First: a witch could not use her ability to violate the laws of the territory. Second: a witch could not use her ability to evade the laws of the territory.

He had considered more elaborate formulations — the kind of layered restrictions that tried to enumerate every possible misuse — and had discarded them. Rules that tried to account for every scenario were rules that broke down in novel scenarios. Better to have two simple principles that covered the underlying logic. And deliberately avoiding the framing of “do not use ability against ordinary people” or any construction that emphasized the distinction between witches and the rest of Border Town: that was a gap he was actively trying to close, not widen.

Witches are citizens. Their abilities are tools. Tools are governed by the same laws that govern everything else.

He wrote the two rules down cleanly on a separate sheet.

The name had come to him a while ago, and it still seemed right.

The Witch Union.

Simple. Professional. It described what it was without apology.

He wrote it at the top of the page, drew a line under it, and sat back.

He glanced at the ancient book one more time. The hurried handwriting on the last pages. Natalia, whoever she was — did she survive? Did she stop Alice? Did it matter, given that the God’s Punishment Army clearly existed?

He didn’t know. He had more questions than answers, and the ruin in the eastern forest was two kingdoms away, and the snow outside was still melting, and Longsong Stronghold was fifty-five kilometers up the river.

One thing at a time.

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