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Chapter 1004: The World in Her Eyes

The smelting zone was the most industrialized stretch of Neverwinter. Steam engines powered everything from the moment raw material left the barge to the moment it entered the furnace — conveyor belts, ore lifts, the feeder hoppers above each smelter. The facility covered a long rectangular tract along the north bank of the Redwater River, coal storage and port on one end, crude oil processing on the other. The conveyor lines ran parallel across grey concrete, black against grey, a rhythm of mechanical patience.

On the west side of the fractionation tower, the oil storage warehouses stood half-built — solid, square, functional in a way that had nothing to do with beauty and everything to do with endurance. Decompression valves, inspection windows, carrier pipes, antistatic shielding: the kind of infrastructure that nobody would notice if it worked and everybody would notice if it failed. The construction teams had gained enough experience from the chemical plant that they’d required little guidance. They simply built.

Roland had come for the ceremony. What held his attention was the evidence of something he hadn’t ordered: the Ministry of Construction and Ministry of Industry had done the design work themselves, brought the plans for his review and approval, and built the thing. No daily intervention from him. The workers had learned to read technical drawings, verify tolerances, communicate across departments without being told how. Two years after he’d mandated universal education, here was the first proof it had compounded into something self-sustaining.

The boiler’s temperature climbed. Vaporized oil ran up through the fractionation chambers, and the tower’s metal skin warmed enough to shed the snow clinging to its joins. Wind had dropped. The cold persisted, but the crowd along the riverbank didn’t thin — they stood with their breath misting, faces tipped toward the tower, spectators at something they didn’t fully understand but could feel the size of.


“So beautiful,” Edith murmured.

She was standing on the steel bridge a few miles downstream, far from the crowd. A few passersby had noticed her and the girl beside her — and had slowed, and hurried on, reluctant to stop but clearly reluctant to look away. In the grey of the snowfall, the Pearl of the Northern Region and her companion were difficult to overlook.

Cole said nothing for a moment, then couldn’t help himself. “It’s a chimney. If you wanted to see it properly, you should have gone with city hall. Sir Barov reserved you a spot. His Majesty—”

The bridge was a good vantage. But the whole purpose of the day — the actual purpose, the one that mattered for career and politics — was standing in the smelting zone with everyone else who held authority in Neverwinter. A first-class banquet was never about the food. Edith knew this better than anyone. She was the most seasoned diplomat in the city and had promised to help Cole build relationships, and she had walked to a bridge in the snow instead.

Edith pursed her lips. Cole shut up.

“Because of you,” she said, lightly. “Do you really want to appear in front of every city hall official dressed like that?”

You made me wear this.

That was the problem. The problem began several weeks ago, when Edith had caught Cole trying on her clothes — and Cole, fearing what she might do with that knowledge, had agreed to her terms. Which, as it turned out, included being dressed like a doll in public. If any of his friends saw him, he would seriously consider the river.

He was composing some version of this protest when someone whistled from behind him.

Heat flooded his face. He dropped his chin.

Edith’s hand found his jaw and tilted it back up.

She held Cole’s head still, then swept her gaze past him — the faintest glance, cool as the air, across the stranger. Unhurried. Utterly uninterested. The look of someone who had already forgotten the intrusion before it had fully begun.

The man stumbled back and left.

“That,” Edith said, “is also a lesson.”

“If I were wearing my usual clothes, I wouldn’t need the lesson.”

“There will be things you encounter — many things — that you don’t like and can’t stop.” She paused, watching the distant tower. “The only choice you have is how you hold them. Do you think I was pleased when Timothy marched his army into the Northern Region? Every coin has two sides. The question is which side you choose to see.” Another pause. “Besides — you do like those clothes. You wouldn’t have tried them on otherwise.”

Cole said nothing. She was right, which made it worse. He would never admit it aloud.

He looked back at the tower, remembering her first word: beautiful. Edith never said things like that about machinery.

“Do you remember what winter looked like in the City of Evernight?” he asked.

She considered it. “Dead silent. As if the earth had frozen.”

“I always thought that was what winter was supposed to look like,” she said after a moment. “It isn’t.” She exhaled — her breath misted, rose, was gone. “Look at it. The earth is breathing. The steam is proof this city is alive.”

“I don’t really understand.”

“It means nature can be changed.” Each word landed separately. “We’ve complied with nature’s rules because we’ve always been weak. When we grow stronger, we change the world.” Her gaze didn’t leave the tower. “Isn’t that beautiful?”

Cole looked at her instead.

Her blue hair caught the falling snow. The cold had put color in her cheeks, softening a face that was usually without it. She spoke with a certainty that didn’t need to be argued — it simply was, the way a high place simply commanded your attention.

He wanted to see through her eyes. To know what the world looked like when you were Edith Kant.


“There’s oil coming out!”

The cheer started near Tower I and spread outward like a wave.

“What’s happening?”

“Someone said oil—”

“Cooking oil?”

“That’s coal, not a kitchen.”

“Who cares? Everything His Majesty builds—”

“Long live the king!”

“Long live the king!”

The cry multiplied, rolling through the crowd in the smelting zone, accumulating volume as people added their voices without entirely knowing what they were celebrating. Most didn’t understand fractionation. Most understood that the king was doing something large, and that large things meant the city was growing, and that the city growing meant their lives would continue to grow with it.

Roland watched from the edge of the square. Black smoke and white steam rose together from the bank, braiding against the grey sky. The metallic frame of the tower cut through snow and mist.

If the smoke above North Slope Mountain had marked the first revolution, this marked the second.

His chest swelled with something wordless.

He let it.

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